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Thank you Elizabeth & Bob. HUGE help and greatly appreciated! Bob, your sentence restructuring is definitely better; thank you! Best, “OC” > On May 7, 2015, at 7:06 PM, E. Thoms Charles <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > > Hello, > Invisible is spelled with 3 i and no a. > > Best wishes, > Elizabeth Thoms Charles, MLS > [log in to unmask] <mailto:[log in to unmask]> > 303-798-1953 > > On 7 May 2015 at 17:17, OC Carlisle wrote: > > Hello All, > > For this story with further edits, rewrites; may I have your opinion. > We are getting close! > > Through these illustration courses, the realization that art and > science are intimately related became quite evident. Science > additionally becomes an art form, such as the SEM images of pollen. > The chemistry of color mixing and its applications to art is a science > as seen in the visible color spectrum (physics). In addition, this > physics application plays an important role for the Monarch’s sight > since they view the world in a color invisable to the human eye: > ultraviolet. This valuable asset helps the Monarch find flowers to > nectar and helps to detect the patterns on the flower. (rewording > here. Make sure it is accurate.) > > The magazine editor rewrote the underlined portion and wanted to make > sure that the chemistry and physics reference and wording was > accurate. > > May I hev your thoughts on this? Thank you very much indeed. > > Best, “OC” Carlisle > Need to leave or subscribe to the Sciart-L listserv? Follow the > instructions at > http://www.gnsi.org/resources/reviews/gnsi-sciart-l-listserv > > ________________________________________________ > > Need to leave or subscribe to the Sciart-L listserv? Follow the instructions at > http://www.gnsi.org/resources/reviews/gnsi-sciart-l-listserv <http://www.gnsi.org/resources/reviews/gnsi-sciart-l-listserv> Need to leave or subscribe to the Sciart-L listserv? Follow the instructions at http://www.gnsi.org/resources/reviews/gnsi-sciart-l-listserv